New Wave Biomaterials
[info]corwin00

                             The security system at New Wave Biomaterials was nothing that Guy Null wasn’t prepared to deal with.  He’d been studying the schematics on the way over to the company’s manufacturing headquarters while on the train.  Mr. Baulker used to be the head of the international research and development department.  While he coordinated a lot of the in-house research, a great deal more was spread through any of the three continents that the company had built development and manufacturing labs in.  Between India, Great Britain and the United States, they all operated independently and with a guiding corporate force behind them.  In Guy’s thinking, it rather sounded like a horrible way to do business, however, the separation of the research departments allowed each department to work on separate projects without anyone stepping on each other’s toes.  Whatever they were doing, it seemed to work because the company managed to increase market share by seven percent year over year.  It was quite a feat to grow so much and dependably when many other corporations seemed to thrive or fail on the market’s whimsy.

 

                             The train stopped with a lurch and slight screech of worn brakes.  The doors hissed open and commuters eager to leave exchanged places with commuters eager to board.  Humans tended to look a lot alike to Guy Null.  It was only when he was supposed to pay attention to someone did he then pay attention to the human’s little idiosecrencies.   He wondered if humans thought the same about machines.  He shook his head.  No, humans are too entwined in their own world to even care what machine looked like, as long as the job got done in the end.

 

                             Guy stepped from the train to the platform and the smell of the manufacturing section of the city struck his sensors harshly.  The people here dressed much more casual than everyone else in the rest of the city.  While machines did the majority of the work, it just wouldn’t do to get a nice suit wrinkled while on the job, now would it?  Guy sighed.  He needed to try and let go of his disdain of humans.  Every once in a while it would creep back into his though process and he’d work on eliminating the source.  The subway train platform was solid duracrete and the walls patterned in a soothing colored tile that held directions in many different languages in a most helpful pattern.  Guy took the stairs out into the bright sunlight and held his overcoat close against his metallic body.  If no one really looked at him, he passed for a human out of the corner of your eye, but just barely.  The coat and hat were yet another way for Guy Null to separate himself from the human world, a lesson he learned a long time ago in what seemed to be a different age altogether. 

 

                             The large megaplex that held the manufacturing center of New Wave Biomaterials was three blocks to the east.  The central nexus hub that covered the security was two blocks west and one block north.  The cables that connected one building to the other ran under the city and through one transformer box located just one block north of Guy’s location.  It honestly didn’t get much better than this.  Crossing the street, Guy prepared the schematics in his head.  The plans were slightly outdated, but it was the best he could obtain with his limited hardware.  Encryption services were a hot business these days and it was easier and more reliable to interface directly with the system than to interface by proxy.  Hardware would always win out over software, and Guy didn’t just buy replacements with the money from his cases, he also upgraded as much as possible.  As the hardware became older, it also got more expensive and harder to find.  In an alleyway between a drug store and a gas station sat an indescript box attached to the wall of the drug store.  The box hummed to Guy, almost as if enticing him to open it up and play around with its innards.  With a flick of the wrist, after a careful look down the alleyway, the cover popped off easily and a constellate of cables and wires shouted out to him in a wall of sheer electronic noise.  What he was about to do wasn’t remotely legal and he made a timestamp remark to erase this section of his memory when the job had been completed.  You can never be too careful.


Dismissal
[info]corwin00

The ink hadn't yet dried on the flimsy check in detective Null's servos before he had the fund electronically transferred into his secretary's account.

                He hoped that after he was decommissioned, that she would be able to use the money to retire at her young age.  It was the least he owed her, as she had decided, on many occasions, to stay in his employ throughout the many difficult times Null’s private agency had gone through.  Three more days and Ms. Evangeline Stone would be the captain of her own destiny once more.  He would have felt envy if those circuits hadn’t burned out twelve years ago.  Instead he felt a small electronic pain as he caught himself wishing the rest of his existence away.

Guy Null watched as Ms. Meredith Baulker sashayed her way out of his office and out the front doors.  Humanity had always amused him – it had always held a certain attraction to him, much like a flame holds the attention of a moth.  Both could be equally dangerous to those that are so enthralled.  When he was with the police department – issued to the city many generations of machines ago – his curiosity got the better of him many times.  He did not know why the other machines did not share his undying curiosity or amusement, only that they didn’t care to “live” beyond their own unimportant lives.  They were tools, machines for one specific use.  To be created, used, and forgotten.

Null felt forgotten quite often these days.

 

Null pounded on the intercom on the desk, a device even more archaic than himself.  Evangeline’s voice cracked over the tinny speaker, “Yes, Mr. Null?”  Her slight accent carried over the intercom and all these years later, he never quite got used to it.  In fact, that was the main reason he hired her.  He liked experiencing new things, and she was many new things to him at many stages of his so-called life.

“Did you know it was your last day?” Guy asked, keeping his voice as level as possible.

He saw Evangeline stand from her chair through the old yellow glass and walk to his office door.  The door opened under her touch and the old hinges protested, as they always had.  “Mr. Null, are you sure there’s nothing else I can do for you, anything else you need?”  Null was very certain that Ms. Stone knew about his decommission in only three days, but neither of them talked about it.  It was almost as if it wouldn’t happen if no one was to think about it.

“Ms. Stone, all that I need, you have already provided.  All that I could have asked from you has already been given.  I assume you have your affairs in order here?”  She nodded once and wiped a small tear from her left eye.  “Then, Ms. Stone, I suggest that you celebrate your new-found freedom and liberty.  I advise you to check your account within the next half hour and prepare to leave in two days.”

Evangeline looked confused.  “Why would I do that?  You know I don’t have the money to go to Mars yet.  You never paid me enough…,“ She choked back the rest of her statement, apparently realizing that she was berating her employer who didn’t have that much longer to exist among the living.  “I’m sorry, Mr. Null, I just don’t have the money for that.”  She looked to the floor.

“Ms. Stone, “Null said, rising from his chair in a plainly artificial, even for him, upbeat voice as he strode around his desk to her, “There is a ticket to Mars awaiting your arrival at Hub 37 downtown in two days.  Your ship leaves at 7:30 Wednesday morning.  I advise you to go early so that you don’t miss it.”

He was surprised at her sudden swiftness.  Tears poured from her eyes as she held him tightly.  He briefly wondered if his chassis would crack under the sudden strain.  She seemed at a loss for words, but she stepped back eventually, opened her mouth and closed it, much like a fish attempting to take oxygen from the air and was only able to squeak out a small, “Thank you so much” before she turned and gathered her things from her desk.   Null watched as dispassionately as he could.  That ticket had cost his own account dearly, but he wasn’t in a position to take his small fortune to the trash heap in the sky with him.

  As she turned to leave, the door half opened behind her, she looked at him and brushed a few more drops from her watery eyes, “I will always remember you.”

“And I, you.”


Wow 8 weeks!
[info]corwin00
***  So it's been 8 weeks since I've had my first entry into Livejournal.  I am trying to figure out where to take the story to, since my feedback, while helpful, doesn't help much to progress the story.  I have more parts written now and I'll be sure to update the story very soon with a part 2 :)

*** I am also wondering about something that's been bothering me.  I was eating dinner at Chili's the other night (my favorite place to eat) and I was in the restroom when I saw what looked to be a shadow under the door of the stall.  There was no one else in the bathroom at that time.  The shadow moved, twisted, and the dissipated like a heavy smoke along the floor.  I had never seen anything like that before and I was wondering if anyone had any ideas as to what I saw.
Thanks everyone!

Guy Null, Private Eye.
[info]corwin00

The whispering whirring of the eye piece as it brought the new client into focus was the only sound Null made as she passed her way through the doorway and to his desk.

"I thought I asked the secretary to turn you away."

"You may have, but Ms. Stone also balances your books."

Null let loose a metallic sigh as he his feet shifted from resting leisurely on the desk and he dropped them to the floor with a resounding thud.

"I trust you have the..." she began.

"I've read the data file and complied a list of leads already, yes." Null replied.  "After all, Ms. Stone sent me this information a week ago - when I told you that I wasn't taking your case."

The blond shook her head slowly.  "You have to understand, Null, this isn't about the money and it isn't about revenge."

"And you have to understand that I have to play everything by the book.  I'm scheduled to be decommissioned in three days."  His hand slammed down on the old oak desk, causing a small fracture in the wooden frame.  "I'm obsolete, old, and decrepit!  Why in the whirling gizmos would you contact me of all beings?"

"Because, unlike the police and the rest of your profession, you have the tendency to, let's say, look the other way when the need arises.  I don't care if you’re the oldest machine in this town; you are exactly what I need!"

Null sat back in the heavy chair.  A puff of steam escaped from his front grill.  She was right and it burned his circuit boards to acknowledge it.  If he wasn't so damn old and it didn't cost so much to keep him functioning then he wouldn't have had to look the other way, the less honorable way, he told himself.  But he needed the money and he needed it bad... at least that used to be true.  The city had decided that his model, him more specifically as he was the last remaining remnant of this history he called life, was due to be decommissioned in less than a handful of days.  The money, honor, reputation - nothing he had garnered over his cold rust-eaten life could prevent his ultimate fate.

He didn't feel despair.  That would have been a novelty.  Instead he felt a great emptiness as his systems refused to believe that any future processes would be non-existent. So why not take the case?  Why waste away sitting alone in a dark room, blowing steam out of his ass and waiting to die by the hand fate has dealt him?

Null sighed that same metallic sigh again; pitch adjusted for a slight variance.  "Ms. Baulker, you have yourself a deal.  Double your payment and make it out directly to Ms. Stone.  She's going to need it far more than myself."

Blood rushed to Meredith Baulker’s face as she quickly fumbled through her purse to find a pen and checkbook.

 

The deal had been done.


First Post
[info]corwin00

I think I'll post my story ideas on here and see what reader feedback I can get.  I have had a lot of different ideas and in fact I've been working on a story for about 3 or 4 years now.  And by working, I mean procrastinating. Thank the Gods for http://lab.drwicked.com/writeordie.html .
So time for feedback:

I had an idea for a 50's style detective novel starring an out dated robot P.I.  Just imagine the story told through the old rust bucket as he's drawn into a web of intrigue and murder!
I had another one recently of a steampunk Ghostbusters type of story.  That one needs fleshed out a bit more, but I thought it was worth throwing out there.
And lastly, I am working on a horror fantasy novel that has well developed characters and plot and is waaay too lenthy to list everything here.

So a story about an old robot detective, steampunk Ghostbusters, or the horror fantasy?  What do YOU want to hear about?


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